RiffTrax: Shrunken Heads

Original: "As the sun began to set, casting a warm golden hue over the mountains, the hikers decided to make camp for the night. They set up their tents in a small clearing surrounded by tall pine trees. The sound of a nearby stream could be heard, adding to the peaceful ambiance of the campsite. After a long day of hiking, they gathered around a crackling fire, roasting marshmallows and sharing stories of their adventures on the trail."

Rewritten: The hikers chose to camp for the night as the sun descended, painting the mountains with a soothing golden glow. They carefully pitched their tents in a cozy clearing embraced by towering pine trees. The gentle murmur of a nearby stream enhanced the tranquility of their campsite. Following a challenging day of trekking, they congregated by a flickering fire, toasting marshmallows and exchanging tales of their exploits on the trail.

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